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Erinyes
By patterjack
28 June 2006
Alecto , Megaera ,Tisiphone

The three Furies of Greek mythology


Erinyes

Red eyed , with hair like trailing long black snakes
Their nipples erect from a terrible lust to tear
at body or soul ; it is not their part to care
if agony is the path their vengeance takes.

With unclean talons hooked tight in my heart,
half bird , half woman , in my fevered dreams
they scream unearthly terrifying screams
rending all I have ever loved apart.

Reviews
An oddity.
Written by gerardconnolly (1185 comments posted) 28th June 2006
My daughter is Erin.  
 
I suspect you did not intend so blatant a suggestion. The Gael is a different creature. I wonder if you know what I mean? Fantasia is ten a penny in any juvenile comic. Your people are your own.  
 
But I enjoyed reading it. Accidental or otherwise. It's taken over five hundred years for the Gael to get back his /her voice.  
 
Slan!

Written by Josie (2144 comments posted) 29th June 2006
Yes, I see who the Enrinyes were, and it was an interesting read: 
 
In Greek mythology the Erinyes or Eumenides (the Romans called them the Furies) were female personifications of vengeance. 
 
Your depiction of these creatures is very clearly defined. I found a lot of interesting information about them on this website: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erinyes (for others, who, like myself, didn't already know).  
 
Very well written Patterjack. My only reference to mythology comes in my poem: Mother Earth's Payback Time - and we can see that she is already paying back. I hope the Erinyes don't also join her for the vengeance of mankind wreaking havoc in the world today!

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