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The Pathway of Pain
By Edward_Anthony
27 April 2005

I was in hospital in 1980 with a broken neck, broken back, dislocated neck, and severe internal injuries when this was penned.  It spells out how we cannot do without turning to God at one point in our lives.

They told me I would never walk again, let alone live.  I had internal bleeding.  My mother turned to God for help.  I was out, walking, alive and well just four weeks after the accident that almost claimed my life.


If my days were untroubled, my heart always light,

Would I seek that fair land where there is no night?

If I never grew weary with the weight of my load,

Would I search for God's Peace, at the end of the road?

If I never new sickness and ne'er felt pain,

Would I search for a Hand to help and sustain?

If I walked not with sorrow, and lived without loss,

Would my soul seek solace at the foot of the Cross?

If all I desired were mine day by day,

Would I kneel before God, and earnestly pray?

If God sent no winters to freeze me with fear,

Would I yearn for the warmth of the spring every year?

I ask myself this and the answer is plain,

If I never knew sickness and never felt pain,

I'd seek God less often, and need Him much less,

For God's sought more often in times of distress.

And no-one knows Jesus or sees Him as plain,

As those who have met Him, on

The Pathway of Pain.

Reviews

Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 28th April 2005
Though not religious myself I appreciate this as a meaningful, enjoyable poem. Just a bit of nit-picking - what is the apostrophe doing in line 5? It's not necessary to the rhythm, which is flexible, and it's rather archaic.
very sincere ..
Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 28th April 2005
very sincere.....
Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 28th April 2005
and I don't want to nit-pick, but re line 5: 
I think "new" was intended to be "knew"?????
Sad but true
Written by luvccritters2 (5 comments posted) 12th May 2005
I really enjoyed this poem. People tend to seek out God only when they are hurting. You expressed your thoughts very eloquantly, I feel. Left me emotional and thinking. Thank you. Should be published for all to see.

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