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Poetry
Assault
By bethyshambles
29 June 2006
So there was a sexual assault round the corner from my work so i kinda thought these words...

Knock knock
Who's there
Knocked down
Who's there?

Up and down
In and out
In and out
Knocked Down

Crushed and crushing
Up and down
But more
In and out
In and out

Breathe and breathing
knocked out
in and out
in and out
soaked.

rain grass nettle
sting

Reviews
superb
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 28th June 2006
Love this conscise style 
 
powerful stuff

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