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Hoody Boys' Pickick

By cynicsid

29 June 2006

Well, they've got their Human rights, haven't they Cherie.

Hoody Boys Pickick.

If you go down to the centre of Town,
You better go fully armed.
Else when you go down to the centre of Town,
You’ll bound to end up harmed.
For all the ASBOs that ever there was,
You’ll find them there for certain because,
Everyday’s the day,
The Hoody Boy’s have their Pickick

Pickick time for Hoody boys,
See them shouting, screaming, making noise.
Causing havoc without a plan,
See how many times they can kick a Gran.
Spraying Graffiti everywhere,
Smashing windows, without a care.
At no time at all does anyone,
Try to stop the fun
Of the dear little Hoody Boys.

Da Capo
Repeat.
End

Reviews

Hi CS
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 28th June 2006

Have you thought of posting this on "Children's?

Ta Again
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 28th June 2006

No,but I did consider "non-fiction"

Do you know where I live?
Written by julie (21 comments posted) 29th June 2006

This sounds like my street. Have you been to the North-East lately?

So true it's hilarious whats the saying "laugh or you'll cry"

brilliant looking forward to seeing more :grin

Fly the flag...
Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 29th June 2006

Makes you proud to be British doesn`t it...sad but very true...

happy writing
woody

Hi Julie
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 29th June 2006

I am aquainted with the North East and sunderland must be the Grafiti Capital of Great Britain.

Thanks for your time and comments.

Siddie.

Hi woody
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 29th June 2006

Nice to see you back.

Thanks for your time and comments.

Siddie.

great stuff
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 1st July 2006

Hi siddie back to your old tricks I see. I daren't go a way for a minute.Another innocent little childrens rhyme desecrated with your satire. Your'e certainly living up to your name. I just loved the juxtaposition of the innocent with the cynical,still with a name like yours what else can one expect
You little rascal
cheers
BBS

I Am
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 1st July 2006

Al ittle rascal that it.

Nice to see you back,

Siddie.

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