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Unbelievable!
By Nance
30 June 2006
Unbelievable!

You find me in this town,

Busy, crowded and full of tiny hopes.

And in early May,

In trembling early May

We are alpinists, and we are on the ropes.

 

Unforgettable!

You’ve never let me drop,

And your words have been so close to my belief.

But today, forgetting me,

You’re ahead,

And this love looks like a tardy falling leaf.

 

Incomparable!

I love these pleasant trips,

Leading me inside this life to find myself.

And today I realize

That losing you

Would be better than to sweep my inner self.
  

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