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Nature Beckons...
By mishmish
01 July 2006
This poem is inspired by the fact that we all rush around in business, like hamsters in a never ending always turning wheel, no direction, just running because life is there. But we should never forget that outside the window, beyond the city streets is a beauty that we can enjoy and experience.

This is particularly relevant as I was in a hot stuffy London office while writing this, and all I could see was glorious sun outside. Just thought I'd share my thoughts and feelings...

Outside, sun is hot
Inside, skin is cool
Working 24:7
Nature beckons the fool

Why do we push
On doors not there?
Why do we hold to one
And hardly ever share?

In a world of commerce
Profits always rule
Circling the planet
Nature beckons the fool

Why do we scream
When everything goes red?
Why do we cry
At actions never said?

Joyfulness outside the window
Obsession with the office tool
Persistence is the key to business
Nature beckons the fool

Why do we search
And always go for gain?
Why do we conflict
And make a life of pain?

Sneakily, time slips by
Too soon the day is through
And what to show for it?
Nature beckons the fool

I long for the blue/green horizon
Give up life in duel
Feel the sun, rules abandon
And be nobody’s fool.

Reviews
Captured that feeling
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 2nd July 2006
Great little read... you capture something that we all seem to get caught up in... busy busy busy... 
 
I would be interested in the answer to the question why do we do it? if its money... how much money do we need? if its status... what does that bring us? If it's success... does that mean that someone who doesn't 'succeed' is less valuable...? 
 
i've stood outside bank tube and tried to cross the kerb to look in the window of the virgin shop, only to have my way blocked by a seething, seemingly single minded sea of suited humanity that marches along the pavement desparate to get somewhere now!!  
 
have we all gone bonkers? 
 
life gets in the way
Written by ellyb39 (79 comments posted) 2nd July 2006
The issues raised by your poem are ones that affect us all, how to make the best use of the time we have, also the fact that it always seems better somewhere else! I like the repitition of natures fool, used very effectively here. The busy way we live comes over well in the phrasing. thanks elly

Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 2nd July 2006
hey mishmash! 
Like the poem !!! i have written 2 similar ones, 'so busy' which is already posted on here and another which I am about to post! It is a thought which crosses everyones minds, especially as you said if your stuck indoors on a lovely day! 
 
Brook x
Busy busy busy
Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 9th September 2006
Well put. It's like the poem by Buchan - there's a big time element. Animals don't worry about time, and they seem to have less stress than humans. But do they appreciate the natural world? We should take time to unwind and get back to nature I think.

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