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And Jesus Wept
By LePetomaine
04 July 2006
The poem is dedicated to a mother whose son died from a heroin overdose.

And Jesus Wept

 
 
You said you could not weep
For to weep was to fall into an endless space
To weep was to impose tears on the children
The living ones-you said
Your first as the poet wrote was deep buried in that silent tomb
That place which no vicissitude can find*

You could not reach that boy

And your heart was buried with him
You lost him to a murderous lover
Who takes life and spits it in the wind
Who promises ‘live today’ and takes away all tomorrows
You lost him to the purveyors of death
You said you had to smile to stop from weeping

You feared if you started you could not stop

You saw him lying there
Breathing shallow, convulsions, coma and death
You would have given your life for your first-born
But he was leaving you and you could not reach him
Your mind was numbed, iced, and barren
This must be happening to somebody else
“Why does God allow this?” You asked

And Jesus Wept

* Wordsworth

Reviews
Fantastic piece of writing
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 4th July 2006
i am envious of your ability to construct such a powerful piece of writing. 
 
Thought provoking. Words that stay with you. 
 
Thank you
Speechless
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 8th July 2006
The power behind your writing is quite amazing. 
 
To be able to create something like this, that works so dramatically and painfully, but without any pretensions or unnecessary emotive license, is quite a feat. 
 
You should be very proud. 
 
I am saddened that not more have reviewed this great poem. 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

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