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By laya08
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04 July 2006 |
no more nothing..tomorrow isn't promised so I don't have time for him..I have to live my life..
It is time
I shall let this pass
Let my life move on
Wanting nothing else
Yet knowing your gone
I have made the choice
The choice all on my own
With this, and that
That and this I have grown
But still in the end
You and I are alone.
I can give you your space
I can let you relax
Let you understand
For this I know and for this
I demand
So, yes the end
This is where we part
Even though you're gone
And gone for good
There wont be a place
No place in my heart.
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Wonderful Work
Written by Tilly (4 comments posted) 4th July 2006 | This is so great! What inspired you? I wish i can write like that!! its just so great!!
I know how your feel getting over someone is so hard and it takes awhile but you do get over them eventually. | cathartic
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 4th July 2006 | A very personal piece of writing.
thank you | Lovely Words
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 7th July 2006 | Hi Laya
You've captured that feeling of finality, of closure beautifully.
The verse:
So now, I finally can let you go
You’re not coming back
I have found my true feelings
You aren’t what I lack
says it all. 'You aren't what I lack' - Often we feel we need someone just because we don't feel whole until we have someone else by our side. This has nothing to do with love, but insecurity.
This poem screams of suddenly found inner confidence, inner strength to make a decision and see it through.
Very strong...well done
best wishes
mishmish |
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