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By pure_heartofmine
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05 July 2006 |
this is a very short poem and one of the first i had ever written. i wrote it when i was 12 after my dog died... i thought it expressed what i wanted to. so Enjoy ^^ When i look at the moon, I think of a tune, though it makes me sad, for i have thought of all the wonderful moment we have had. |
Pure and simple
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 5th July 2006 | Very nice piece.
thank you | For You
Written by Buchan (42 comments posted) 5th July 2006 | | Few words expressing so much.Well expressed. |
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 8th July 2006 | Captures your feelings beautifully.
best wishes
mishmish | Short and great
Written by ReflectingGod (30 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | I like this very much.
I can relate to the feeling of losing a four legged friend
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