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| You Lied | |
| By pure_heartofmine | ||||||||
| 05 July 2006 | ||||||||
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its really rough around the edges i havent been able to change it yet to where it still fits what i felt. i think its actually harder to edit it then to write it. always a challenge finding the right words. Tears I’ve cried Lives I’ve died You lied How thoughtful Said you’d be there Said you care More lies And I believed Stupid me Said you loved me The biggest lie of them all How could I believe? Oh wait I know why I believed in everything But thanks to you That’s all changed Thanks a lot You put out my light Now I’m stuck forever in the night Always wandering in the dark Never myself Never alive Never a bright heart Now I die inside Inconsiderate selfish pig I hate you I HATE YOU with all my might! I WISH…. I wish you a long messed up life. Live with the pain And always regret What you did to my life Now, just get out of my sight.
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