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Seduction
By patterjack
06 July 2006
Abstraction about abstraction

Seduction

Seduced by the abstract noun to forget the real ,
to forget the throb and pulse of youthful blood
and let the passing of his years repeal
the judgments that his flesh once understood ,
he attempts pronouncements through mere intellect
not with those senses , once so sweet and strong
but attenuated now , in themselves suspect
as a world to which he can no more belong .

Now past the intensity of passionate youth
he turns instead to climb the glacial heights
of the ladder of abstraction , seeking truth
in other than the senses' giddy flights.

And yet Tithonus still cannot dismiss
the memory of sweet Aurora's kiss .

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Immortal Abstraction
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 8th July 2006
Superb work patterjack! Tennyson would be proud! 
 
Loved the in-joke...and you needn't worry, it worked beautifully! 
 
Great stuff...keep on writing 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

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