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By Buchan
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06 July 2006 |
It is so important that children swim from a very young age..Parents ,Someone help them. Never cold in a warm sea Swim in water wet and clear Please don't drown going down Air around must be found Blue ocean dark and deep No place to dwell or sleep Truth to tell fish swim well Elephants do.......do you? |
Very true
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3559 comments posted) 7th July 2006 | I agree with you on the importance of children able to swim and this simple bit of verse expesses it well. This would work well in childrens book of verse. And the ending me smile,so often poems end weakly but this was brilliant
cheers
BBS | Hi Buchan
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 9th July 2006 | BRN's piece and your's are didactic and serve a useful purpose.
It's a soul destroying Forum as nobody seems to read and review the work of others.
Part of the delight of Web-Sites is getting to "know" fellow posters through "reviews".
CS |
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