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| By Marie | ||||||
| 07 July 2006 | ||||||
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Hi Everyone, I have writen some very small piece of work. I thought I'd better start somewhere before I become a shadow wishing I had done this and that. I know the piece needs work, it's quite obvious. But my problem is when I do try I end up throwing it away because nothing seems to work, or could it be that I do not have any patience. Any way I shall let you judge that brave little piece of story that normally would have journeyed the adventures of a dusty bin. cheers Marie The weather is hot, very hot here in Casablanca. I am packing my suit case and looking forward to return to my home in London. Not because I enjoy London's wintery grey skies and the grey tombs of concrete streets closing in on me as I head to work at the office. I miss my cosy bed and the sound of the alarm clock at five am summoning me to wake up and get to work on time. Oh yes, the office person I am. I work behind my walnut desk entering data that I never question. I feel my soul is being devoured to nothingness and as evening presents itself there comes a glimpse of hope that tomorrow is only a night away. My footsteps hurriedly runs towards the sardined packed bus. Blank faces of people meet my eyes and my mind ponders as I look to switch the light on. So here I am in Casablanca packing my suitcase and breathing in the exotic aromas of an ancient land surrounded by tall palm trees that almost reach the vibrant hues of blues in the sky. The music flows through the white washed walls and my body is invaded with colors of rose healthy cheeks and a tanned body. The Hotel Sauniere is surrounded by marbled columns and the inviting sculptures of the French Renainsance and Morrocan garden seem in marital bliss. Whilst packing my suitcase a sense of surrealism and anxiety overcomes me. Looking at the ocean from my hotel window I admire the lilac ocean waves that cools the beige sand. I hear the laughter of people passing by. And I ask myself have I yet tasted the escargot served in with a hot sauce? hum, I am thinking to myself I could this evening have the couscous with coriander lamb and spices? Oh, and I almost forgot Madame et Monsieur Pierot have invited me to their chalet. I heard the belly dancers from Marakesh are performing a most exotic and artistic dance tonight at the hotel Music room. My eyes suddenly brighten and my lips curl to an subconscious smile, I breathe deeply and the light switches on like lights on a Christmas tree. My brain is filled by an electrical warmth travelling through the core of my existence; I laugh and say loudly Jean Pierre would be there. I unpack my suitcase. Marie
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