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White Christmas
By nicola
28 April 2005


 

White Christmas

Early in the morning a fox
Tawny against the white-iced grass
Stalked seagulls


The birds wheeled upwards
Dark against the snow-covered curve
Of Three Rock


Beneath the Indian Ocean
The earth trembled
And was still

 

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Excellent
Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 9th May 2005
Spare use of words to create strong imagery. 
spidey

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