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| My reflection | |
| By pure_heartofmine | ||||||||
| 07 July 2006 | ||||||||
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i take pride in this piece because it is the only non-depression thing i have ever written, i believe. i also take pride in it because it IS who I am. enjoy. comment. critique. thanks! Jillian After all my days, Of just lying around, With nothing to do, Yet no time to spare, I looked at myself in the mirror. What I saw was a broken figure, Doomed to live in the shadows. Who was I to challenge fate? What’s happened... happened, There’s nothing I can change. But as I sat there, Just staring at my reflection, It changed. I saw love and hope, Peace and understanding, I finally accepted myself for the way I was. I wasn't a figure doomed to make the same mistake, I was the person I was meant to be, And I was meant to be me. Lost in my reflection, I saw a change in my expression, A smile had creep onto my face. I had finally started to do what I was meant to do, I was learning to just live my life And with that I left my reflection behind.
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