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| By lordspudz | ||||||||
| 07 July 2006 | ||||||||
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This is a poem I'm including in my novel and was interested in some comments. It was written by the main character shortly after losing his wife in an accident. Can I? Can I sleepwalk back to a time where waking was paradise found?
Can I play in the land of haunted memories where time is a wounded soul?
Can I run through fields of emblazoned corn and weep where once was joy?
Can I smile at your face with hope where once reigned abject pessimism?
Can I walk these streets of cosy familiarity, retracing steps where love strode carefree?
Can I dance to the beat of long forgotten rhymes in halls of acoustic muteness?
Can I dare do these things in stark solitude where once was union?
Can I live without you?
Can I? ©Lordspudz
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