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By chocolate_puddle_duck
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09 July 2006 |
this is not off the net its 100% me made so enjoy see if u can work out the morel there was a women standing by a lake. a girl came to this women because she was told that the women was the holder of all wisedom yet, only three sentance ever cam out of her mouth but the people that went to see her were always happy when they came back. the girl said to the women " how can i capture beauty?" " i want to beautiful." the women replyed " go down to the river and look at your reflection, ask your self what u see and three times reply i am as beautiful as i want to be then wash your face in the water when you look again you will see a beautiful girl but only if you believe it." but.." the girl objected " go child and you will see" " beautiful people are those who know that they are beautiful on the inside" |
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3285 comments posted) 10th July 2006 | If you wanted us to guess the moral of the story you should have been a bit more ambiguous with ending.. You did state it clearly at the end. I think it would have been stronger if you had made us work it out for ourselves. These sort of stories are better like that cheers BBS |
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