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By nicola
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28 April 2005 |
Once I saw your face In every window as I passed Reflections of your light Mirrored in the glass Shimmering through trees Caught in drops of dew Shedding pools of light on water Gilding ripples on the sea Reflect again for me In dark brown bogs deep cut Cool light in the shadows Of the locks of the canal I see your crescent face once more As I remember you But I forget my past Too soon my memory wanes
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Lunar Landscape Written by RDLarson (10 comments posted) 27th December 2005 | Title: it's well named Beginning: ethereal and lightning, yes. Voice: good; never fails Character/Dialogue: NA Style: Very pleasant and yet rendering visions of sight in the mind Drama: certainly at the end Emotion: Very sensitively said. Plot: NA Theme: Passing of time Ending: complete and sad but happy.
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