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Lunar Landscape
By nicola
28 April 2005

Once I saw your face
In every window as I passed
Reflections of your light
Mirrored in the glass
Shimmering through trees
Caught in drops of dew
Shedding pools of light on water
Gilding ripples on the sea

Reflect again for me
In dark brown bogs deep cut
Cool light in the shadows
Of the locks of the canal
I see your crescent face once more
As I remember you
But I forget my past
Too soon my memory wanes

Reviews
Lunar Landscape
Written by RDLarson (10 comments posted) 27th December 2005
Title: it's well named  
 
Beginning: ethereal and lightning, yes. 
 
Voice: good; never fails 
 
Character/Dialogue: NA 
 
Style: Very pleasant and yet rendering visions of sight in the mind 
 
Drama: certainly at the end 
 
Emotion: Very sensitively said. 
 
Plot: NA 
 
Theme: Passing of time 
 
Ending: complete and sad but happy. 

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