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| There I Was All Alone… | |
| By James | ||||||
| 09 July 2006 | ||||||
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Well I'm not too good at titling things, so I just used the 1st half of the first sentence from the majority of my poems. This poem, as you will soon realise upon reading it, is about suicide. I sorta felt low for a while last year or so ago, so I wrote this peom to put an end to it once and for all. I didn't ever try to kill myself, although the thoughts did cross my mind. I'm more than fine now so theres no need to worry. I look forward to your reviews! By the way, I'm a 16 year old and with peer preassure, GCSE exams, etc. its not a suprise I felt a bit stressed. This is my 1st poem. One last note, thanks for reading!! This poem was written on 03-07-3006 and published on 09-07-2006 at 21:37:13 There I was all alone; no one was there, no one to care, I sat on my own; I kept thinking about it over and over, did I dare? It seemed so simple, just to end it all, I thought it was time for my curtain call. Life was tough but I never thought I’d see the day, Where I’d take my own life and make everyone pay, It just got too much for me, I needed to go, One final slit, one final blow… So here I am, faced with the biggest decision of my life, Should I stand tall or should I stop this fight, It’s too hard for one person to overcome, My final hour has almost come. So as the blood flows from my wrists I stop and think, Running frantically for the sink, This is the end, its time to say good-bye, My life is over, it’s the end, as a tear falls from my eye.
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