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I Wish I Hadn't...
By James
09 July 2006
This poem does have a meaning, but I really don't want to go into it. Instead I say that this has univeral meaning and I hope alot of people can relate to it. I think you will

Written on 03-07-2006 and published 09-07-2006 at 21:52:13

Thanks for reading and can't wait to read your reviews!!

I wish I hadn’t done that, it felt really crap,

It hurt a lot as my eyes poured like a tap,

It wasn’t gentle, it wasn’t kind,

‘When is it over?’ stuck in my mind.


It was all over so soon,

What felt like a life-time was only nearly noon,

I dried my eyes and sorted my self out,

I felt like an idiot, I felt like a lout.


Is that what I wanted? Is that what sums me up?

Just a quick hello, down to business and tea in my cup,

I wanted more than this, I wanted something unique,

Something special, something sweet.


I get looked down upon because of it,

Abused, laughed at and hit,

It’s not nice being me,

And you really don’t want to see…

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