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| To Think I Used To Love You... | |
| By James | ||
| 09 July 2006 | ||
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Well Lauren did somthing that upset me the other day, so I wrote a poem about it. I still love her loads, dispite the title of the poem and how I was feeling at the time of writing. Well, the poem speaks for itself. Thanks for reading and can't wait to read your reviews!! Written on 04-07-2006 and published on 09-07-2006 at 22:00:33 It’s pretty ironic isn’t it? Quite sad but defiantly true, The fact that my pen and paper met, to write lovingly of you, But that’s all about to change, because I know that you know, When it does strike twelve, the evilness of the devils crow, Comes out and stabs me in the heart, For all I’ve thought of you was a wasted piece of art. To be honest, you’re the person I’d least expect, But when I look back now and reflect, You never really seemed interested in how I felt, My heart was like ice, that your fiery truth did melt, So now I sit here, thinking of my mistake, I blamed a real close friend, for that myself I hate, Don’t think I’ll come crawling back like I used to, I’m a stronger person now for all I’ve been through, I was speechless when I heard the news, To keep on loving you, I refuse, For I can’t believe you would do this, My broken heart travels through this abyss. Now it’s time for my final decision, I think long and hard with clear precision, There’s nothing more I can do, I’m full of hate, If I repeat my actions I may suffer the same fate, So I’ll let you have your say, But hurry up, I don’t have all day…
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