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| Here is the Dark Eye of the Sea | |
| By BenMathew | ||||||
| 10 July 2006 | ||||||
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Here is the Dark Eye of the Sea For bone, rock cutting in, Circling off a circle of shadow darkened sea, Dividing from the pale swell A jet black pupil Now the surging sea, Bulging over the blistered boundary, Pooling in craters, Veiling the rim of the pupil wedding white Down streams the sea, Pushing the pupil out of it's socket, Spilling it up to the swell, Filming over a cataract of drifting swirl But only momentarily, For the whirling water is sucked down again, Leaving the raw wall Of the socket flecked with foam Once again silence, Weightless water in the deep, Hanging like gas, For gloom is melded with sea This is the rhythm, In me, my thought, senses, inseparable from it, Tugged round And round by the waters dark gushings Slowly transposed beneath me, The cycle of each thought living only to exit, I can stop neither, The in, out, gushings of the dark eye But here is a round pebble, Following it's shape I find the shape I began with, More reliable, an anchor, The dark waters break against it.
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