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Poetry
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By gutterkitty
10 July 2006
On prejudice and stereotypes.

In the photograph
I am a wall
reflected
in your eyes.
I am a beetle.
I am exotic.
I am wrong.

My skin is not a palette you would taste.
I do not stick to your brush,
oily on your tongue,
Beneath the red of which whispers:
I am a blank canvas.
I am a wall.
A palette covered in white,
or black.

That is what your eye kisses,
a black and white negative.
The closest you know is grey,
smooth on your gums.
But there are no black and white people
Laughing in this photograph,
And if your lips would meet
And you stopped
leaning on me
You would see,

My concrete is laced with rainbows.
It is not smooth at all.

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dorothy and toto land
Written by steve_turner (21 comments posted) 11th July 2006
i think it's odd that the best work on this site gets few comments. maybe that's a compliment. 
 
i liked this, it was gutsy sans preachy. 
 
throw rocks at cars...
love the backwardness
Written by no1butClo (339 comments posted) 16th February 2007
This really did it for me kitty, I like the introspective and this piece hits the spot. I like the way you move between the real and the otherwise [if tha makes sense] so the reader ends up no-quite-sure-where. 
 
agree with steve, but keep working on it, it's perhaps a little rough around the edges 
 
clo :)

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 16th February 2007
I've just found this and I like it a lot too. Perhaps it is a bit personal -- I want to know why this person is leaning on the narrator, for instance -- but there are some great lines. I particularly like 'My skin is not a palette you would taste.'

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