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Slalom story (in less than 107 words)
By kevinrobson73
28 April 2005
Smokers might appreciate this

Exterior : Blue sky sunlit day, atop snowy mountain

Slalom course laid out series of "gates" of red and blue flags downward at fifteen yard intervals on steepish slope

 

Two thirty something chaps in brightly coloured ski wear

chap 1: Do I ski to the left of the first flag and then right of the second etc, or do I go right of the first left of the second, do I zig-zag or do I zag-zig?

chap 2: I wouldn't know, I'm a tobogganist

chap !: oh sorry, I didn't realise .......... can I have 20 Benson and Hedges?

 

Reviews
a one liner
Written by DustinBowcott (66 comments posted) 1st May 2005
not my sort of humour but i'm sure it'll appeal to some. 8)
Go and stand in the corner!
Written by Nearlypastit (50 comments posted) 19th May 2005
I wish I could write in red type and then the long dead memory of Miss Jones at my primary school could come back and scribble "See me!" 
 
Actuall Miss jones was NICE, so it wasn't much of a threat. 
 
So, do we have a stand-up section yet? This is where you truly belong. In fact we should consider a stand-up thread perhaps?  
 
Ed? Nas? what do you think?

Written by MrsMonday (3 comments posted) 3rd June 2005
:p corny but nice

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