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Indifferent ( Warning!!! Adult Content and Swear Words)
By maipenrai
12 July 2006
Born out of Frustration.

I am indifferent to you
who the hell are you?
go away,just f--k of
and leave me in peace.

Whatever have you done for Me
For Me
For Me
For Me
I am indifferent to you,don't give a toss

Your suffering you say,
starve you b-----d ,starve
what's that to me
your a different colour to me anyway

I am indifferent to you,
I don't need your wailing,your outstrtched hands
don't need to watch your starving brats die on my tv
 cause I am drinking with my mates tonight

I am indifferent to you
you don't mean a f--k to me
I have got my life,I have got my wife
and I am taking my kids to disneyland
in the morning ,so get out of my face
I am indifferent tou you.

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sad truth
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 12th July 2006
i can't explain why their is so much indifference to the suffering of others. i thought human being were innately compassionate and altruistic... we must have re-learned just to care about ourselves... its pathetic and tragic 
 
this poem was very powerful, thanks for making me think
thanks and
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 13th July 2006
there is a lot of frustration and anger i let loose in this one

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