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Love Poem to BBS No.3
By cynicsid
13 July 2006
Move over John Donne.

Innocent one I love you: so,
Of with your kit
And away we go

Reviews
Shameful
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 12th July 2006
Just go wash your verse out!
eh?
Written by bobbybonce (7 comments posted) 13th July 2006
These last three posts are utterly baffling. 
 
Is BBS your girlfriend? should these be on poetry?
multiple thanks
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
well siddie
and more
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
you little scamp
yet again
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
I dont know
and again
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
whether to be flattered
and again
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
or worried by this
again
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
as you have such reputation
again
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
now behave yourself or
again
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 13th July 2006
I'll set simonward onto you 
I didn't mean to multiple post, honest, your honour 
Now back in you box siddie 
BBS
Great Writing!
Written by simon.ward72 (60 comments posted) 13th July 2006
This is Great Writing Briansid, well done.  
 
Keenly crafted and, most importantly, darned funny.  
 
I like what BBS did with the multiple reviews.  
 
 
Simon
Ta BubBleS
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 13th July 2006
But what's wrong with the other two? 
 
Do you realise you have been immortalised. 
 
People will be asking who was this BubBleS?  
 
The gay lobby will have have you as one of theirs. 
 
Women's Lib/Dykes will see you as a harrassed heroine.  
 
Mick will be perpetually perplexed. 
 
So what's wrong with the other two?
Refund
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 13th July 2006
Can I please have the last 3 minutes of my life refunded?  
 
Yaaaaaaaaaawwwwn. 
 
3 mins?
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 13th July 2006
To read this? 
 
Have you got "learning difficulties?  
 
I bet reading makes your lips sore. 
 
Still it's nice to see you, to see you post.
Cum Cum Siddie
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 14th July 2006
No need to be peevish. 
 
Or gratuitously rude. 
 
Now, say sorry to the nice man. 
 
(Poor Siddie is very emotional, he's over-strung.)

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