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Poetry
Let's Do It
By Lewy
13 July 2006
Freeflow style writing, playing about with the William.S.Burroughs Cut-up Method.
I.E write on the computer cut into 6 pieces re-order and re-type, add a few words to make it make sense, cut up into 6 again and re-type again adding a few word or taking words away to make sense.

Works better with more text.

Please tell me what you think.

Cheers!

We should all have a mad night out... A night of dancing on tables and the drink flowing like a river, deep and wet down our gullets... A night of music and drunkenness in the deep grey night, with angels and sailors, devils and blues men, singing, Grooving, whining, magical notes that echo though our minds, the makers of that sweet blue music in the lonely orange lit streets, we cry endless tears of times before... We dance, and the music flows on. The drink winds it's path to our minds, intoxicating, provocative, endless, emotion... we all become reptiles moving our feet on the hot floor to keep cool, cooler than a ticket takers smile in the electric theatre. Dancing till we can't dance no more, shear and utter wisdom controls our inebriated minds, like witches under the moonlight, circling in a monotone drone, around and around, feverish, crazy, laughter, insanity, Jazz, beat, love... the drink river flows on.

IT WOULD BE GOOD SO LETS DO IT!

Reviews
excellent
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 13th July 2006
piece of work,no kidding,this took me along with it. 
 
ok,i am not used to this type of layout,thats my prob and does not take anything away from the piece. 
 
Bernie
stream of consciousness
Written by no1butClo (341 comments posted) 11th May 2007
and alcohol! 
 
I love this piece lewy, raelly took me with you, just touch it up a little, read it over and see what you can do... 
 
wicked, well done 
 
clo

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