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By maipenrai
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14 July 2006 |
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Aah,yes I know them they come into my dreams the one's who haunt me five and six years old when they were taken, they haunt me never forgiving how can they? I lost their lives I made a mistake.
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Written by MikeMorris (106 comments posted) 14th July 2006 | What can I say. The ones who took them are the ones to blame, not you. Mike | Thanks Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 14th July 2006 | Thanks Mike for your comments. Bernie | powerful.. Written by isobel* (26 comments posted) 3rd September 2006 | ...yet sparse and straight to the point. leaves room for our imaginations to ponder what has provoked the poem. i may be ignorant of what drives your writing, but these are my feelings at first glance. haunting. i like it |
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