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Poetry
Mistake
By maipenrai
14 July 2006
Aah,yes I know them
they come into my dreams
the one's who haunt me
five and six years old
when they were taken,
they haunt me
never forgiving
how can they?
I lost their lives
I made a mistake.

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Written by MikeMorris (106 comments posted) 14th July 2006
What can I say. The ones who took them are the ones to blame, not you. 
Mike
Thanks
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 14th July 2006
Thanks Mike for your comments. 
Bernie
powerful..
Written by isobel* (26 comments posted) 3rd September 2006
...yet sparse and straight to the point. 
leaves room for our imaginations to ponder what has provoked the poem. 
 
i may be ignorant of what drives your writing, but these are my feelings at first glance. 
 
haunting. i like it:)

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