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THE NOISE!!!
By chocolate_puddle_duck
14 July 2006
just a little kiddy thing thats been playing on my mind...

sam was sure she heard a noise.

 the more she tryed to ignore it and, the more she told herself it was nothing,

 the more convinced she became that,

 someone or something was downstairs.

 She peared out of the window,

 but there was nothing but a lamp-post across the street and beyond that a big sky
 
filled with glinting stars in the pitch black,
 
sam walked across the hall-way,

and into the spare room on the other side of the house,

she opened the curtains.

and frose in her footsteps sam just staired.
 
she was as pale as a ghost,

she squeaked and started the shiver ,her mouth wide open.

the squeakin began to get louder until,

 it turned ito a high-pitched blood-curdelling screach!

 she was a wrech,

yes there was someone,

something on the other side of the pane of glass.

something so horiffic you don't even see it in nightmares.

it had grey eyes with red rims,

 blood-shot and evil,

 a piercing stare that looked as it it was going right through the back of her head.

 something happened that night after she screamed...

her voice was never heard again she just dissapeared...

GONE!

Reviews
simple and scary
Written by starbucks* (2 comments posted) 15th July 2006
i can't believe this. i can't even sleep well! whatever happened to sam plays in my head. the face. the screams. you are awesome! :eek
Wait, what?
Written by FlightlessWings (5 comments posted) 8th March 2008
It was too simple, there was no room or time to get into the story before it just ended and i was supposed to be scared but i wasnt so i was confused. I think its a great idea that needs more development...

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