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Poetry
Solitude
By Buchan
16 July 2006
Just a thought.

                                 Solitude like an empty box of air
                                 Or traffic lights always on continual stop
                                 Alone in a cold house ,without a  warm fire
                                 Rope with no visible end,sea of green weed 
       
                                 Tomorrow a number, today a past thought
                                 Time a consideration,life a journey of hope
                                 Happiness a confusion of mind, a situation
                                 Feelings a hill, cloudy sky, resting place.
                                
                                 















           















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Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 17th July 2006
Not sure I got the full twist of this. But well worth a few seconds review. Some of the metaphors don't convince me. But having said that the thought was clearly father to the word which is what, rightly or wrongly, I understand poetry to be about. So all about it is what poetry is about. 
 
Well done! 
 
Slan!

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