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By chocolate_puddle_duck
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16 July 2006 |
just something i wrote when i was inspiration-less and very very bored so dont expect it to be brillient I looked around; nothing to say nothing to do it was pitch black and silent, how long have I been waiting here? Waiting for it to arrive, so distant I can't even remember what I’m waiting for. Just that it’s very important and I need to keep waiting. its ten minutes past 2 goodness it’s been longer than I thought but still there’s something inside of me, urging me to stand here, urging me to stay.
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well done
Written by free_unchained_spirit (1 comments posted) 16th July 2006 | very good suspence what was the person waiting for? well look forward to seeing more of your work xxx  |
Written by Faerie_Queen (1 comments posted) 6th March 2007 | Enjoyed it. would def make a good intro into a story, or perhaps the ending?  |
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