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Secret Diary
By BrokenBiatch
17 July 2006
Secret Diary of a Girl Who is Broken.
Im not really good at spelling so if any mistake please tell me and please just give me a chance im new at this.
This is a True Story but it is not about my life.


Dear Diary

It is the 17th of July 2006 today. The day before I go back to school and i am at home.

My mum has gone to work and my sister is at her boyfriends. Im all by myself, so to keep me busy my mum has left me heaps of jobs, but luckly for me im a fast worker and i got it done in 2 hours so now im bored at home talking on msn. Most of my friends are out having fun. They new i was home alone but they neva thought of inviting me because they dont think im fun enough and no im not being a drama queen i got one of my good friends from another school to ask them and thats what they said. It totally got me down when i found out, i sat there the night i found out crying because i thought that they were my really good friends when they are just liers.

Right now i am in a fight with my boyfriend because he thinks i am cheating on him but its not true. So he is saying i am and he saw me with another guy at the movies and shopping, but he has it all wrong i was at the movies and shopping with another guy but the guy is my cousin and like ewww i would neva go out with my cousin.

My life so sucks right now. School has lost all intrest because like come on my friends hate me my boyfriend is going to dump me it looks like and im failing every class so i dont see the point any more.
I would whoop but i cant because my mum would ground me for 5 months and i hate being grounded because it is so boring not being able to go out.

Yep i was right my boyfriend just said we are ova, im dumped. I knew it would happen he was so angrey and he neva believes me about any thing, but i still loved him and now it is all over. I guess i had it coming oh well.

Well i got to go get ready for dinner.
Read My next entry when it comes

Thanx BrokenBiatch

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 17th July 2006
This has the ring of truth about it and you obviously know this world even it it isn't your story. As an older person I find this writing a bit self-indulgent and self centred.I read this but I'm not sure how much more I could manage without a plot or story evolving. Using the diary format only is very restricting,perhaps it could be just part of the story. With regard to spelling, I'm puzzled you get the difficult words right and the easy ones wrong is it part of the slang? 
cheers 
BBS

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