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Little Tiny Tim
By maipenrai
22 July 2006
Little Tiny Tim
went for a swim
down in the River Nile
his Mummy screamed
Timmy don't swim so far
don't swim so fast
there's Croc's in here don't you know

now Timmy was told
but Timmy was bold
as he swam in the River Nile
faster and faster Young Timmy swam
father away from the fold
till Timy got tired and
he cried for his mum
who was nowhere to be seen.

and watching in the reed beds
was one so cold and vicious
a predator for all to see
his name was Mike the Croc
or Michael to his Mates
oh,how he licked his lips and 
crunched his teeth.

I will have that lad
the one so bold
he will be like a lolly
when he is in my mouth
oh,what a jolly day this is.

now Michael was happy
full of the joy's of spring
for Michael enjoyed
eating little boys
and Little Tiny Tim
was never,ever seen again.

now Parents beware of Predators
they lurk where you least expect
taking your little one's from you
and eating them up,
just like ice-cream.

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