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The teacher complains
By patterjack
24 July 2006
In 1951 I accompanied a group of boys from the high school where I was teaching to a combined high schools sports carnival -- my first experience of such , and of the general feeling of disorganisation that accompanies herding excited young boys to their assigned places .

In an idle moment I must have composed this , which I have just re-discovered while cleaning out some rubbish from my desk .

Nostalgia rules .


Sports Day
Formless , unpatterned , the dynamic surge ;
created chaos creating chaos , massed
itself for movement ; then the urge
for other forms denied it form , dispersed
its energy on wider fields of force.

Puzzled , we sought centre ; there
we found our single haven , our refuge
from centrifugal tendencies , from where
we could impose our pattern , could engage
to counter-balance torque with counter-torque.

Thrust along each radius , break the rim,
hold the hub and still divide and rule,
set group on group , turn whim on single whim
till the dynamic dies , the surge is still,
so that it must destroy its very source.

Such is the pattern from the start of time;
after the chaos comes our stern control.
We split it , held it , forced it into rhyme
Yet it , ( was it of body , mind or soul ? )
could run before we tried to make it walk.

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Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 24th July 2006
Will Pm you re your two latest posts! 
 
Kind regards 
Brook :)
Captured Memories
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 24th July 2006
The stunning feeling of movement in this work is quite astounding. I really feel the I am being buffetted around, this way and that, like the boys in your sports carnival. 
 
The imagery embodies chaos without a doubt, and the lines: 
 
We split it , held it , forced it into rhyme 
Yet it , ( was it of body , mind or soul ? ) 
could run before we tried to make it walk. 
 
..suggests that despite some discipline applied, the force generated when such a group of boys are brought together, nothing will work, and they can never be controlled. Your poem grabs their young erratic nature beautifully. 
 
Well done Patterjack!! 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

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