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| By emmy | ||||||
| 26 July 2006 | ||||||
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I was aiming to write a short story but somehow the initial inspiration constucted itself as a poem. That surprised me as I haven't written poetry before (although I have been reading a lot of it of late) and would therefore value some constructive criticism. "I'm fine", she said and lied her smile not quite reaching her eye. "I don't mind", she said and tried not to show how it wrenched her inside. "It's okay", she said and cried alone when she knew she could hide. "No trouble", she said and implied that the truth would damage her pride.
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