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| Atop the Ridge | |
| By anna_svit-kona | ||||||||
| 28 July 2006 | ||||||||
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I'm not sure how I came up with this one. Maybe in a dream....Tell me what you think of it
Atop the ridge myst and a sweeping breeze He treads soft, but shimmers, he neighs, oh he sings! Satin gold, midnight against the steadfast grey Calls sad, hooves striking sky a brilliant display
Atop the ridge myst, cascading down light Playing, gleaming off the hide of a legend Rising,circling, flowing, touching, reaching out His lonely lament for what that once lived about?
Atop the ridge tears crystal and touching What has been torn away from the heart equine? Survey the land below, what do you miss king? But... could sky lift you, you could go off awing...
Atop the ridge the sun no longer shines What is lost? Whom do you mourn? Can't you show me? Where is your spirit your fire and your zest That not all that long ago you had possessed?
Atop the ridge tear crystal from me... Your eyes with heartbrokenness faintly reflect Far away thoughts of joy,adventure and thrills Across the plain through the valley, rocks and rills
Atop the ridge sadness and mourning know You weren't always wild, that look I understand You once loved a human and hearts melded close No longer, red goes to ground, lifes like a rose...
Atop the ridge joy will return someday Satin gold midnight, will soon prance true and proud Pull through but don't forget smooth gated, glider You are a stallion... and once had a rider
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