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Rose Bowls
By nicola
29 April 2005
They sit among the tea sets

And the coffee cups

In the auction rooms.

Two glass bowls

Rose bowls.

They were hers,

Then they were mine.

 

They once looked beautiful

On the mahogany tables

In her chintzy sitting room

When we had tea together

With damask cloths

And silver teaspoons.

 

Removed to my life

They  looked out of place

I am not a rose person

More an earthen pot

And wood turned person.

Hand woven and roughly carved.

 

I am not the person

She always wanted me to be.

So today I took the rose bowls

And all the days of roses

To the auction rooms

And said goodbye.

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Good imagery
Written by montholon (17 comments posted) 30th April 2005
I thought the contrast between the life styles of the poet and the original owner of the rose bowls worked very well. There was sadness and regret there; sadness at the loss, perhaps. and regret at disappointing to this lady, who must have been very important to her. A very poignant piece of writing.

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