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Nori The Snail
By Buchan
28 July 2006
Being kind and nice is good..Not nice being rude.

                            I saw him today,house on his back
                            Slow as he travels ,tracking his way
                            Slidding and slipping getting on down
                            A snail another animal look what we found

                            Going to a place his destination far
                            Perhaps it would be much better by car
                            Taking time ,life without care,just getting there
                            Never a worry following through living like we do

                                 
                            Next time you look at a slow brown snail
                            In the garden,a path,please never fail
                            Remember it could be Nori,sure and slow
                            Please dont hurt him ,he is nice you know.
                            
                        

                           
                      

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Slowing down.
Written by Fledermaus (3506 comments posted) 10th September 2006
I liked this sentence: 
"Perhaps it would be much better by car" 
 
It added some humour to the poem. And a good advice indeed. Hopefully it'll safe some snails.

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