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Mary Sue, I love You!!!!
By rilLie
30 July 2006
a product of boredom.. all is said and done... it's fun to write Mary Sue intentionally...

oh, there was once a young maiden,

by the beautiful name of Mary Sue,

with hair as golden as the rising sun,

and eyes of the color deep, dark blue.


she was smart, she was funny,

the center of all kindness,

she was generous and pure,

and of all, full of goodness.


in a land far, far away, she was from,

she was rich, yet so compassionate,

she gave money to the poor

and was even nominated for the senate.


yet, she had said no,

she was for the people, that was it.

she smiled so sweetly,

the world she lit.


and now, I must end,

this awefully awkward piece

for ideas, I have no more,

but for one last message: peace!

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nice
Written by writerpoet (7 comments posted) 1st August 2006
nice little poem

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