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ETERNITY
By writerpoet
01 August 2006
I THOUGHT OF THIS POEM ONE DAY WHEN I LOOKED IN THE MIRROR,ALL MY POEMS ARE TRUE STORIES.

 

I LOOK IN THE MIRROR

WHAT DO I SEE

OH MY DEAR

I DON’T SEE ME

 

MY EYES ARE BLEARY

AND SLIGHTLY ODD

MY HAIR IS STRINGY

OH WHERE IS GOD

 

I SMILE SO SLIGHTLY

OH YES ITS ME

I SEE MORE CLEARLY

SUDDENLY I SEE

 

A LOVELY SMILE

SKIN LIKE DEW

NOW I KNOW

I HAVNT A CLUE

 

AM I LOVELY

A HEART OF GOLD

WHY OH WHY

AM I SUDDENLY COLD

 

NOW IM SIXTEEN

OH SO PRETTY

THE YEARS HAVE GONE

I NEED NO PITY

 

MY BABE IN ARMS

SMILES UP AT ME

SHE LOVES ME

 SHE SEES ME


OH DEAR OH DEAR

MY EYES CANNOT SEE

NOW IM OLD
DO YOU SEE ME

 


 

I MET MY LOVE

IN A CLOUDED BAR

AM I TO OLD

OH NO SAYS HER

 

SHE SMILES AT ME

WITH LOVE IN HER EYES

AND KISSES MY LIPS

WITH A HOPE SO WILD


 

 

SO DON’T WORRY

YOU’RE NEVER TO OLD

TO FIND YOUR ETERNITY

AND BE SO BOLD

 

 

 

 

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