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I LOVE YOU SO
By writerpoet
01 August 2006
this is a true poem a


 A TRUE POEM TO XXXXX



THE

SUN SHINES BRIGHTLY

AND BLUE IS THE SKY

THIS WONDERFULL LIFE

IS NO TIME TO DIE

 

MY TIME IS SHORT

BUT IM NOT MAD

IV BEEN SO HAPPY IV NEVER BEEN SAD

 

 

PROMISE ME MY GENTLE LOVE

YOU WON’T CRY

JUST SING WITH THE DOVE

 

OUR YEARS TOGETHER

WAS LIKE A TREE

SPANNING THE UNIVERSE

ITS BRANCHES TO SEE

 

MY LOVE WAS STRONG

AND WONDERFULL AND KIND

DON’T MISS ME DARLING

YOUR HEART I WILL FIND

 

THE LAKE WE KISSED AT

THE FLOWERS WE PICKED

THE CHAMPAGNE LUNCHES

ALL THIS WAS BLISS

 

SO BYE MY LOVE

AND NEVER FORGET

YOUR HEART IS MINE

GOOD NIGHT GOD BLESS.

Reviews
Emotive
Written by Gill21 (566 comments posted) 1st August 2006
A very sweet and touching poem. The title confused me a little and i'm not sure it flowed all that well but i'm not a poetry expert. 
I liked it. It was sesitive, and emotive.

Written by anna_svit-kona (42 comments posted) 2nd August 2006
Agreed with Gill. It wasn't a bad poem
so sweet!
Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 4th August 2006
so sweet! i love it! :) 
 
-rilLie 
 
0_o
hmmmm
Written by snax0 (5 comments posted) 14th August 2006
I was almost crying at the end! Not sure if this was intended or not - but I do feel that the writer was sincere and serious (though happy).

Written by josefnpat (19 comments posted) 15th September 2006
Not a bad poem, but filled with many unapetizing clichés. 
"this wonderful life is no time to die" 
cliché 
"iv been so happy iv never been sad" 
bad spelling and cliché 
"good night, god bless" 
what does this poem have to do with religion? Why god bless? 
 
what I do like is "LIKE A TREE,SPANNING THE UNIVERSE,ITS BRANCHES TO SEE" 
 
I don't understand how all caps really fits the mood of the poem. Sheer simplicity? 
 
well, good luck, i'd try again. 
-Seppi

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