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janice chapter 2
By chocolate_puddle_duck
01 August 2006
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She walked beside the path as quietly as a mouse until she was out of mellow way. She got her bike from behind the tree she had hid it behind the day before, put her bag on her back and she was off. 
 About two hours past but she kept on going because if she was anywhere near where she lived they would all know who she was. Janice  got to a signpost saying 'Didcot two miles' so she kept going.
finally she got to Didcot, found a tree and that’s where she slept for the night.
The next morning, after waking up she realized that she was not under a tree but in a bedroom, “where am I" she said, "now now dear you look like you've had a pretty rough night. Do you remember anything?" replied a women’s voice as a wrinkled face surrounded with grey hair looked down at her.
"No" whispered Janice, "well then, can I ask of your name? mines Margaret”. The women smiled. "oh, I’m um, j, jenny, yes that’s me I’m jenny." She looked uneasily at the women," well then jenny I think we better get you home." "NO, I mean, I can't I’m too tired yes, tired couldn’t I stay here for a while longer?" Janice pleaded, "oh ok you can, would you like anything to eat my dear?".


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