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knightly knight
By chocolate_puddle_duck
01 August 2006
it is random i know sper of the momment thing

 my knight in shining armour,
glistening in the sun,
my knight in shining armour,
whos time has just begun,
my knight in shining armour,
who is so often feared
my knight in shining armour,
oh gosh he's dissapeared!

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Written by anna_svit-kona (42 comments posted) 2nd August 2006
Your ryming makes for smooth reading. Is it suppose to be amusing though? Because it made me laugh. The end line that is.
yes
Written by chocolate_puddle_duck (6 comments posted) 2nd August 2006
it was so quickly thought of i just made it i suppose but yes it was supposed to be funny. :p :p

Written by FlightlessWings (5 comments posted) 8th March 2008
very cute! reads smooth and adds humor to a subject usualy used as a romanse thing, i loved it!

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