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First Encounter
By patterjack
02 August 2006
Picking up from the last entry , and taking advantage of Brook's reference to Ernie. Any takers from here ?

As he sat on his upturned rucksack , Peter took in the sights of the Village High Street , mentally checking over which ones would be the most valuable for him to investigate .

There was , of course the pub , a must for Peter as , on his various forays around the cities but in particular in the country , he had been carefully sampling all the different brews he could find . It was his habit to walk into a pub and ask for half a mild , half a bitter , and if there was one special beer on offer , half of the brewery's best. He still remembered with great pleasure a Five X that he had consumed in Devizes, a rich dark brew that went very close to the best he had tasted .

But that was perhaps a secondary consideration , because , if he was going to stay for a time , he would be seeking a place to stay temporarily till he found a more homey accommodation. Perhaps , he thought , there might be an advertisement in one of the shop windows , or the Post Office , something to check out , or he might even hear of something while talking to some of the drinkers in the pub .

He stood up and stretched , flexing some of the stiff muscles that he had acquired sleeping in the woods. Perhaps it would be a good time to wander along the street , checking the windows .

He donned his rucksack , started over the road towards the line of shops , and then , when he had almost reached the one called The Wishing Well Cafe , he paused , hearing a sound that denoted the first sign of life .

It was the familiar rattle of milk bottles in a milk float , which at that very moment was turning into the street and moving down the road .

Fumbling in his pocket to check for change , Peter decided that he would stop the old man driving the float , and buy himself a bottle of milk that could go with the few biscuits that he had in his rucksack , quenching his thirst and at the same time providing a reasonable start to a breakfast .

The float soon drew level with him , and Peter signalled it to stop.

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Try this ..........
Written by Bagheera (709 comments posted) 2nd August 2006
Stranger: Pint of gold top please! 
Ernie: Arrr! Be forty pence 
stranger counts loose change 
Ernie: You'm be'in 'ere looong? 
Stranger: No. just arrived last night ......... 
E [interrupting] Nay, lad, not "been": be'in, 
be'in t'day, be'in t'morrow, be'in next week ... 
S (relieved) Ah! I'm looking for someone, I might  
be off tomorrow if he's here, or it might take a 
few days because he's not expecting me! 
E: Got a name, 'as 'e? This friend? 
S: Yes, but I think I'd best wait until I can speak 
to .........  
Bar: Sergeant Bagheera! Lovely to see you, to see 
you ... 
Sgt B. flexes knees, self-consciously Naah, 
then! Who saw what everyone talks at 
once,and we (=audience) hear nothing of what 
is said
 
TO BE CONTINUED (I'm falling asleep at the keyboard!) 
another great piece!
Written by brook_rivers (486 comments posted) 16th August 2006
Going back to having detailed charactered descriptions it may also be useful for those of us writing to have a more detailed plan/description of the layout and buildings in the village. Perhaps some kindly resisdent could give patter jack a tour?  
 
Thanks patter jack for including so much consisitency it is clear that you have read all the other village tales from the info you use in your post. It flows on very nicely from all the other writing that has been done.  
 
As to bags comment i would like to take this a bit furthur and suggest once we have got past the initial stages of describing everyone/thing maybe we can start adding more speech into the posts? after all the original idea was for a 'soap' although i must admit this is the style i also prefer writing in and enjoy reading the most!! 
 
well done patterjack  
 
brook
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Written by brook_rivers (486 comments posted) 16th August 2006
& sorry pen names and characters got mixed up in my last comment. I meant 'give peter jack a tour' as of course he is the character and patterjack knows just as much about the village as the rest of us - namely whats in our imaginations!!! 
 
Ta 
 
Brook x

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