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In The Wishing Well
By patterjack
05 August 2006
Lot of words without much progress . Dropping hints here and there for later use .

In The Wishing Well 1.

The morning sun felt good on his back , and the biscuits and milk had allayed the major hunger pangs , so Peter settled himself to wait patiently. He was in a contemplative mood , thinking back over his past travels . Reaching into his pack he withdrew the small diary that he kept there , and which he used to record the major events of his trip , as well as using it as a kind of account book .

The cash expenditure of the past month or so had been a trifle more than he had intended , and so he knew he would need to refill his coffers very soon. Meanwhile , he did have a credit card and a couple of traveller's cheques that he had been saving for any emergency . Nevertheless , this morning , if he wanted to eat before he could get to a cash machine or an open bank , he would have to draw upon his special reserve.

Always the cautious one , he had secreted a couple of notes in a slot in the back of the diary , not enough to sustain him for long , but enough for the moment . He slid them out , thought for a moment , and then returned the larger one to the secret compartment . Then taking his pen that was part of the diary , he began to write in the story of the night before . Generally he made observations of where he had been and what he had done , daily if he was able , but he thought that he would not attempt to forecast what he would be doing in this village.

In his earlier days, he had taught himself a system of shorthand , and over time had modified it into what now resembled a code, probably easily broken by an expert , but sufficiently esoteric to baffle anyone who picked up the diary casually and tried to read it . After he had completed the entry , including the 40 p for the milk , he clipped the pen into its place and returned the book to the rucksack .

Satisfied with that small chore , he decided that it was now time to go for breakfast . Crossing the road he passed by the florist shop where a woman of somewhat elderly appearance was arranging the display . She glanced up , and then , as he walked past , moved outside to the front of the entrance , and stared at him openly , following his progress down the street.

Both the eating places had opened , so he paused for a moment before each of them as he walked along the footpath . It was , he thought , pretty much of a tossup between them, but The Jumping Bean had a bit of an air of being more likely to cater for morning teas , coffee and cakes than for anything hearty . The Wishing Well looked as if it would provide something a little more substantial , even if it had a touch of the greasy spoon about it . So , slipping his rucksack off his right shoulder , he pushed the door open .

A small bell clanged , and the young girl who was busy stacking clean cutlery into open drawers by the counter , turned and looked round at him . Peter made a tentative gesture towards a single table near the window , raising his eyebrows to ask whether he should sit there .

-- That will be fine , said the young girl . She picked up a metal clip stand holding a menu and brought it to the table . She stood there looking at him him with a hint of curiosity .

-- I think I'll make it the full English breakfast , said Peter with a smile . I haven't eaten much over the last few days .

-- Tea or coffee ? , asked the girl .

-- Oh tea , please , said Peter , and the girl moved over to a large urn , picked up a nearby metal teapot , dropped a teabag into it and filled it from the urn. Then she called across the room ,

-- Milk ?

-- Yes please , said Peter , and she brought the teapot , a cup and saucer and spoon , together with a small container of milk and placed them on the table in front of him.

-- Be a minute , said the girl . Won't take too long . You're the first this morning so not everything is ready yet .

-- That's all right , said Peter and settled back relaxed to gaze out of the window . He was immediately aware of the watchful eyes of the woman from the flower shop , who had apparently followed him part of the way to the cafe . As soon as she saw him notice her , she turned hurriedly back into her shop .

-- Don't worry about her , laughed the girl from behind the counter . If curiosity was to kill that cat , she'd be long dead .

A minute or so later she brought the breakfast . Peter looked for a name tag so he could thank her by name , but she wasn't wearing one , so he merely said his thanks and proceeded to tuck in .

He had almost finished when the bell clanged again and a young looking policemen entered .

Reviews
Nicely done
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 6th August 2006
Your'e getting quite into this, well done Patterjack. I am currently very busy in KL so have no time to contribute for a couple of weeks. I will link up with you in keeping this alive when I have time as I'm sure will brook rivers, so don't despair, you're not alone!! 
 
All the best 
 
Givitsum
loved it!!
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 16th August 2006
Very enthusiastic about all the great village posts now!!! 
 
Another class entry patterjack.  
 
I liked the intro of the writing aspect, we have previously mentioned somewhere about having rhythm n rhyme nights in the pub. something to think about.  
 
Your dialogue again was brilliant. The last paragraph was very amusing. Nice to see peter jack interacting so well with the other members of the village.  
 
Best wishes 
 
Brook

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