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Not so easy rider
By MikeMorris
06 August 2006
'Do you think I should get a motor-bike? '
said Gracie to her Mum.
'Not this year, dear, ' her Mum replied,
'Some books might be more fun'

'But I would love to buzz along
much faster than a scooter.
Does a motor-bike need to have a horn? '
'No, dear, I think it's a hooter.'

'But I could go to the shops for you,
and get things on your list.
I'd be there and back so quickly
I wouldn't be even missed.'

'You're very kind, Grace, and I know
a motor-bike would be heaven.
But we must keep the law, you see.
And this year you're only seven.'

Reviews
very witty..
Written by rilLie (329 comments posted) 7th August 2006
it rhymes alright and i laughed a lot, on the last line, i mean. :grin  
 
keep writing! 
 
-rilLie 
 
0_o

Written by clockwork (17 comments posted) 15th August 2006
I love it. Being a biker the lighthearted touch appealed to me.

Written by MikeMorris (106 comments posted) 15th August 2006
Thanks a lot rilLie and biker. 
Any chance for a spin for Gracie on the pillion, biker? 
Mike
funny
Written by emacskye (23 comments posted) 24th March 2007
:grin every parent will have had a conversation like this, it made me laugh.

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