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| Mary Sue, I Still Love You!!! | |
| By rilLie | ||||
| 07 August 2006 | ||||
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the sequel to "Mary Sue, I Love You!".. i was so bored with Language class today... we were taking up the positive, comparative and superlative degrees of adjectives and we've studied that since first grade! Plus, we were having the lesson, as we always were during Language, in the Audio Visual room -- it's air conditioned... my mind started wandering while miss was talking about it... this is the result. i know that the first one had the rhyme scheme: ABCB... this one's on AABB.. i don't know why.. most of my poems are in ABCB.. i guess i just felt like an AABB poem at the moment.. *sigh*... enjoy, anyway! Her hair was dazzling like the sun, blonde, and straight, and beautifully done. The adjective: "perfect" really suits, all her projects bear good fruits. Her feet so dainty and so light, Her skin so smooth and oh so bright. Her lips so shiniy and so red, I was really shocked dead. She was generous, she was humble, nice and oh so bloody simple, her life was filled with kindness, and practically overfilled with goodness. Alas, on day, she got hit by a bus, and, my friends, she has now left us. But in my mind apperar her eyes so blue, Mary Sue, I still love you!
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