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| Multiplication of Bittersweet-07/08/06 | |
| By exeeohsies | ||
| 07 August 2006 | ||
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Basicallya lot of words thrown into a poem. Shes leaving, shes cold n mind and thought He never thought he'd be frightened of what he forgot She throws him a look it isolates him there. He studies her face with hope then despair. She isnt wondering what he's thinking he doesnt really care. If love was hate, it wouldnt change coz sometimes its never really there. The tears in her eyes are the tears he depise coz they've broken his heart so many times before. There she goes again slandering his name, waiting for her lov to explain. All he has left is the envy and theft of the very last heartstring he had. She leans in so close letting him know she loves him and really feels blessed. but he's involved enough and feels the need to be loved fro just being him...but its tough.. Now she knows its a game he feels the same all he needs now is a girl with a different name.
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