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Poetry
6.08.06
By exeeohsies
07 August 2006
    Not quite finished.        

You seem to lack the emptiness
that everybody thrives on
yet they search for inspiration
but your already gone.
Your living on the needle point
waiting for it to happen
your life to break the chain the motion it's happened.
So you can feel the rain again
cold on your skin
drenched in your pain again
screaming to let you in

If its only words
I'll say it only once





too be continued.

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Written by Gill21 (566 comments posted) 9th August 2006
Great so far! Looking forward to the finished product.

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