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Plan (so far)-Welcome To Paradise
By Trifox
07 August 2006
Plan:

Title: Welcome To Paradise
Rating: None, At The Moment
Author: Trifox
Disclaimer: All Of It Is Mine <3
Summary/Notes: Your average cruddy practice story, considering I havnt written since last year. Pretty Much, Story= Mercenaries V. Escaped Lab Experiments...*sighs*

Welcome To Paradise None, At The Moment Trifox All Of It Is Mine <3Your average cruddy practice story, considering I havnt written since last year. Pretty Much, Story= Mercenaries V. Escaped Lab Experiments...*sighs*

Background:

Year: 2050-UN Mercenary Convention has been altered; now "private military companies" can be hired for use by Sovereign-States, and for the "protection of restricted science"-in short, bio-engineering experiments.


Private island lies off the coast of Indonesia, and is home to the W.O.H Research Facility.


Island Bought in 2025 by Dr. Irnimi Atulau.

Setting:

Island home of Dr.Irnimi Atulau, and its surrounding landscapes; mountainous, tropical forests...


Inside W.O.H research Facility, and its numerous compounds, corridors, and laboritories.


Characters:

Angeline Mason-24, Born In London, UK. Adopted at Age Of 3, after her birth-parents died in a road-accident. Very Cold Personality. With her cream-colored skin, and full lips, is attractive, with almond-shaped steel-grey eyes. Her straight, blonde hair is short and is worn in a precise style. She is very tall and has a narrow build. Her skill, and excellent performance in a variety of situations have earned her both rank, and reputation. Team Captain.


Trent Bartlett-28, Born in Nottingham, UK. Had a privileged child-hood, but chose the Armed Forces over a University Degree "to get more outta life through experience than by listening to some git with a textbook". He is a friendly guy, but likes to believe that his superior age and the fact that he is male should have gained him the position as team leader, rather than Angeline. He has a muscular build, with a ragged mop of black hair, and brown eyes, and is surprised and offended to find that Vicki and Angeline are the only women hes never been able to charm. Team Support.


Vicki Freeman-25, Born in Bath, UK. The only other female on the team, Vicki specialises in communications, and has a frightening amount of skill with a flick-knife. She has a curvaceous figure, and her deep green eyes, and milky skin have gained her a lot of attention from the men she encounters. Thankfully Vicki has little effort to make to outwit them, especially when ot involves Trent.


Harris Blackwell-30, Born in USA, moved to UK aged 14. The oldest on the team, hes happy to have a "youngster" tell him what to do, and finds Trent Bartletts'constant cries for attention, and disrespect towards the women on the team irritating. With his tanned skin, and his deep brown hair and eyes, hes considered a catch by most women, and-though he doesnt know it-especially by Vicki. Team Demolitions Expert.


Lee Higgins-24, Born in Cardiff, Wales. Team Sniper. A close friend of Angeline, He respects her position, and her decisions, and-though too much of a good-guy to do it- would like nothing more than to string Trent Bartlett up by his guts and leave him. Though not the most attractive man in the world, Lee's charming personality and sweet-nature serve him well on the dating front. He secretly holds a flame for Vicki, and is disappointed when he starts to see her attraction to Harris.


Dereck Townsend-27, Born in Southampton, UK. The son of a builder and a house-wife, his childhood was not that of a happy child. Team Medical Officer and Gunner. Dereck is another ballsy accident of nature like Trent Bartlett, and the two are close friends.


Dr. Irnimi Atulau-A fired geneticist, whose growing obssion with the possibility of creating "life without life" had alienated him from his colleagues, and eventually lead to his dismissal.


Dr. Lisa Byrd, asisstant to Dr. Atulau. Very little is known about her, although she has been known to act as a guinea pig in some of Atulaus' more controversial experiments.



Reviews

Written by Gill21 (566 comments posted) 9th August 2006
Sounds complicated! However very well thought out. Go for it. 
 
Happy writing

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